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I begin to convulse,
The pain, the rattling of my bones, is agonizing,
As my skeletal frame begins to rearrange,
I try to resist, but fail this fate renders me incapable of repulse

Every living fiber of me takes on a new form,
I howl alone in sorrow and disgrace,
I am ashamed of the monster I have become,
I want to rebel from this fate not to conform

My heart is tattered,
Wounds fresh and deep, carved by my heart's desire,
She doesn't share the same emotions for me, only her true love, my bitter enemy,
The hopes I once had, are now echos of glass that is shattered
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I wrote this for a poetry/prose contest at Edward-cullen-fans, a twilight series fan club. This poem is told from Jacob Black's point of view. I really feel sorry for him, and I realy feel that he isn't proud of being a werewolf, and wants to be human He is also deeply torn that Bella doesn't share the same love for him that he does for her.

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amazing =]
i love twilight and jacob black

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i wanna wake up in the city that doesn't sleep
:iconrazumihin:
i liked the end, a lot.

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judas was a brother of mine
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wow. I saw this on the new thing,and I was reading it, on the little, icon, you know how it scrolls, and I am like that sounds like something from twilight, and now here I am about to favourite it and it is lol.

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Because I said so.
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:iconyellowsubmarinex:
Thank-you, Woah I've never recieved so many comments on one piece in such a short amount of time.

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"Living is easy with eyes closed, misunderstanding all you see" <3 Strawberry Fields Forever
"A pessimist sees the difficulty in every opportunity; an optimist sees the opportunity in every difficulty. "
-Winston Churchill
:iconyellowsubmarinex:
Thank-you so much for the fav and comment. Yes it is from the twilight series. I wrote it for a twilight poetry/prose conest here on DA, that some fan club I joined is having.

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"Living is easy with eyes closed, misunderstanding all you see" <3 Strawberry Fields Forever
"A pessimist sees the difficulty in every opportunity; an optimist sees the opportunity in every difficulty. "
-Winston Churchill
:iconyellowsubmarinex:
Thank-you so much! It really means a lot to me.

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"Living is easy with eyes closed, misunderstanding all you see" <3 Strawberry Fields Forever
"A pessimist sees the difficulty in every opportunity; an optimist sees the opportunity in every difficulty. "
-Winston Churchill
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lol. that's cool. I am so obsessed with twilight series, its scary. you go look at my favourites, I guarantee 85% will be twilight based.

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Because I said so.
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